Monday, 28 July 2014

Review: The Girl from the Well (yes, that well)




 
The Girl from the Well
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Publication Date: August 5th 2014        
Publisher: Sourcebooks Fire
~A copy was provided by the publisher in exchange for an honest review~
 

You may think me biased, being murdered myself. But my state of being has nothing to do with the curiosity toward my own species, if we can be called such. We do not go gentle, as your poet encourages, into that good night.

A dead girl walks the streets.

She hunts murderers. Child killers, much like the man who threw her body down a well three hundred years ago.

And when a strange boy bearing stranger tattoos moves into the neighborhood so, she discovers, does something else. And soon both will be drawn into the world of eerie doll rituals and dark Shinto exorcisms that will take them from American suburbia to the remote valleys and shrines of Aomori, Japan.

Because the boy has a terrifying secret - one that would just kill to get out.

The Girl from the Well is A YA Horror novel pitched as "Dexter" meets "The Grudge", based on a well-loved Japanese ghost story
 
 
 
 
The Girl from the Well is one I'd love to say I loved, the concept was perfect for me. The ultimate scare because I absolutely freak out when it comes to these types of spirits/myths, as of Bloody Mary. The Ring scared the crap out of me, a few years ago insomnia kicked in and I couldn't sleep and I was too tired to read so I put the TV on, and guess what it just happens to be on? Yup. The Ring. Right were she's coming out of the well. Needless to say that night I didn't sleep at all and decided to stare at the static just to make sure nothing moved.
The Ring is based on two myths, the one being Oiwa of the Yotsuya Kaidan, who was fooled into drinking poison and murdered by her husband.  The second, which is what The Girl from the Well is  being based on, the Japanese Urban Legend myth of Okiku  The Dish Mansion at Banchō) of who was murdered by someone she loved and trusted from a higher social status than her, betrayed  and then thrown down a well. She's been around for hundreds of years and she is an Onryō an avenge spirit, hunting down child murderers all over the world to give, like her, the murdered victims the peace they need to and to untie them from their murderers so they are free.
I'm not going to lie, the opening scene is terrifying, so  you are warned in advance if you go to read it, because seriously, creepy and grotesque and a little unnerving, and I know I like creepy and weird and I have read similar works to this it did unnerve me a little. But that could have also been because I was reading it in the dark. So don't do that either, unless you want the ultimate experience, then go ahead. So on the horror/scare side of things I loved it and it did its job.
So what didn't work for me? The writing. The constant taking number on things and everything, whether it's objects or humans, that made me feel like I had OCD,  and It gave me a headache. You eventually get why, and the numbers play an important part in both the Okiku legend and the story The Girl from the Well is spinning. But, the more it was present, which was a lot, the more it jarred me out of the story and I had to reread paragraphs because of it, and by then it got annoying so I skipped over things completely.
The Girl from the Well  is also written in a way that gives us a wider view of what's going on through the multiple characters, but it isn't written in third person. It's written from the perspective of Okiku telling us what's going on which for me, led to the characters to being bland and devoid of any personality. Even Tark , who is supposed to be the most interesting out of the bunch, you learn. When they're supposed to be scared and scenes are supposed to be intense I just didn't get any emotion from them either so they couldn't carry the story, and the only reason I kept reading and finished it was to find out more about the Legend and the scary parts. If you took that out? I would've DNF'D it before the fiftieth page.
The Girl from the Well offers you scary lore and exorcisms which implies some intense scenes , and although it did deliver on the scary, it however, didn't deliver the intense and emotional response you'd expect from the characters.
 
Rating: 2.5-3-ish/5

 
 
 

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Haha I totally warned people about the numbers. I knew that would bug some people. Sorry you didn't enjoy it as much because of the style.
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1 reply · active 563 weeks ago
It wouldn't have bothered me that much it wasn't in most sentences, I just felt like pulling my hair out, haha.
I really really want to read this because: I WANT A FREAKY BOOK. I haven't been really scared reading a book since about 3 years ago when I first read Unwind. (Unwind isn't THAT scary!) So...I'm absolutely dying to read this, just because everyone says it's really freaky. (And, I won't lie, it also sounds like an episode of Supernatural.) Pity the writing was sucky, though. :|
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1 reply · active 563 weeks ago
THE BLOODY MARY episode is the one that most freaked me out. But ahhh, this ones more like the Party On, Garth episode. ;)
What a great premise! Sounds like the book didn't quite live up to it. I'm amazed how often that happens.
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1 reply · active 563 weeks ago
Yup, pretty much 7/10 do. :(
Oh too bad for the writing, the premise sounded so good and the myth as well, I always love that but if the writing doesn't follow it's really cmplicated...
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Totally agree about the opening scene...freaky!! I get how the writing style could turn some people off to the book and I had a hard time getting used to it myself. I wished I would've done a little research on the legend before I picked it up, but I enjoyed it overall.
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1 reply · active 563 weeks ago
I knew a bit about it before going into it, but you learn a lot in there anyway, so it doesn't matter that much. It would've been better if I could've gotten over the writing style, but really couldn't. Some others I have but this? It just wouldn't let me for some reason.
The lore and concept being what you wanted is great, and glad to hear you enjoyed
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1 reply · active 563 weeks ago
Yeah, I enjoyed that about it, but not much else. :(
The few reviews I've read so far have pretty much said the same thing - that the horror scenes are wonderfully done and creeptastic, yet the writing abruptly changes and becomes confusing sometimes; which is definitely a shame. I think I'm still going to give this a try because I really like the premise. :) Thanks for sharing and, as always, BRILLIANT review! <3
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1 reply · active 562 weeks ago
Do, it might not annoy you as much! :)
Well this book definitely sounds interesting, though I'm sorry to hear about how bland it was. It doesn't even sound like I should give it a try anymore; I hate when either the perspective or the writing make the story dull (though oftentimes it actually ups the scare for me). Maybe I'll try this book out one day. After all, I do like numbers haha.
1 reply · active 562 weeks ago
If the characters had voices it would've been better, but I just got nothing from them- maybe it's supposed to be that way since it's from the spirits view? I don't know, but it just didn't work for me.
Even if you have given this book a perfect 5 stars, I wouldn't still pick it up because OMG, I don't do horrors. I've realized that since long long time ago. High five to the Ring! I've actually watched both the Japanese and American versions but that's only because my siblings and my mother are crazy about horror so I don't have a lot of choice but to go along. But yeah, all throughout the movie, I keep on standing back and forth, going to the kitchen, covering my eyes and ears and anything that would distract my attention from the movie.

Such a shame that this one didn't justify the films that it took inspiration from. And if there's one good thing that it did for you, you were able to have a good night's sleep. Hahaha. Imagine if the scenes are done well, I'm pretty sure that your The Ring-induced insomnia will return.

I also have to add that I don't like numbers so that's a deal breaker for me.

I hope your next read will be better than this one!
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1 reply · active 562 weeks ago
Ahhh, I love Horror! (Though my brain doesn't) ;) Yeah, it would've been good if they referenced it, like Supernatural and some others were in Say Her Name by James Dawson (about Bloody Mary).

But yes, at least it didn't keep me up, haha. I'd probably would've stared at my kindle, just to make sure...:P Most of my other August books were good, so I'm happy. :D
Hmm I contemplated requesting this one, but decided against it. I don't really want to read it, but I want to see if it's able to creep me out.
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1 reply · active 562 weeks ago
It was creepy in an overly obvious way, more of a turn-your-stomach kind of way, but still, that was probably the best thing about it.
I'm completely planning on reading this one only when it's light outside and there are other people around. I can't handle horror movies, so it's weird that I've even seen The Ring, but it scared the crap out of me. And yet, I love YA horror. :) I'm hoping that because I'm aware of the quirks in the writing ahead of time I'll not be too bothered by them, plus I'm not normally bothered by those kinds of things... I'm sorry this didn't live up to your expectations! :(
1 reply · active 562 weeks ago
Ha, same! Though I do like reading them in the night, I know I shouldn't, just can't help it. ;)

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